Thanks for uploading that. You probably want to take some time to clean up your soldering, and maybe even get some inexpensive parts to practice with.
I've marked up your photo:
The red circle is a joint that needs more solder; notice the eyelet is not full, even on the solder side.
The yellow circle is a few of many joints that need to have the component leads clipped back closer to the board to avoid shorts.
The blue circle is a joint that looks "cold"; it is a misshapen blob rather than a nice tight cone. (It also needs the lead cut shorter.)
The green circle is closer to what you're going for, with the caveat that it's a little blurry, so I may be missing something.
If you haven't already done it, I'd recommend looking on YouTube for some video tutorials on soldering through-hole PCBs. If nothing more, it will give you examples of what to shoot for. Also, read through
Stephen's Tips For A Successful Build. Some of the info is not pertinent to every build, but it's got great suggestions with lots of example photos.
Let me know if you have any questions!
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